Was that part of your intention?
Means: I can’t write fiction out of an intention. That’s when it goes flat. I don’t have a single method except to dig in and to respect the story. Most move ahead on a straight line, one way or another. In one a man refuses to tell his story a group of men around the campfire, but we get to hear it, we’re privy to it, and it’s a straight narrative with some leaps in point of view. Some of the stories are road narratives. In a few, the characters do a lot of talking, and, sure, they do talk the way we talk at the table, or the bar, spinning it out, and I was thankful when they began to speak. If you listen to a certain kind of talk—and I get my fill, believe me—it’s often in mythic terms, always a bit of folklore fueled and governed by some deep moral—or amoral–code.
Rumpus: There’s often a darkness to your stories and a good deal of violence and death, but in these stories there’s more interest in criminality – and in some cases celebrated crimes, legendary stuff. Has that been a long interest of yours? It’s always been for me.
Means: I’m not interested in criminality, per se. If anything, I think my heart goes the other way. My concern most of the time is with the victims, with those eaten up and devoured. Specific souls in specific predicaments in specific places are the way to go for me. I just heard something on CNN a few days ago: a woman lost her little boy in a terrible car crash and every year, for the last three years, she put a pot of flowers on his grave (they showed it, a rather ugly hunk of what seemed to be gardenias), and each year the flowers were stolen, so this year the police put a GPS unit in the pot and tracked the flowers to this guy’s house. They showed the tracking device blip moving across a map. He was giving the flowers to his mother-in-law. That’s the kind of story I like. I wonder how the cop felt, watching the blip on the map as it moved across town? I wonder why the guy picked those flowers to steal? I wonder about the mother’s grief. The world is beautifully symbolic.
Rumpus: I really liked “Reading Chekhov” and the way the characters operate alongside those in “Lady With the Pet Dog,” as though these smart internal people have inadvertently found themselves caught inside a ruthlessly astute short story, which can’t end well. Can you talk about where this one came from?
Means: I love Chekhov. All I can say is that adultery, like fishing, hunting, hiking in the Russian woods, gambling, dueling, war, love, drugs, poverty, wealth, is traditional story material: a crime against honesty, vows, the church (if you believe), the body. It can be a betrayal of the heart, time itself, usually taking place in quiet, discrete places. I’m drawn to quiet places. In part, that story came out of putting those characters in the New York landscape. The feeling you get walking down through Riverside Park on a hot summer afternoon and suddenly arriving along the Hudson River; the secretive sense you get when you’re in wooded areas in a city–that sweet smell of concrete and tar and grass mixed together. What I admire about Chekhov’s story is the way it spins out into the future at the end, and yet the reader is still watching Gurov cut a watermelon back in the room. Chekhov buries the moral lines in the complexity of reality. As Flannery O’Connor said, “It is a plunge into reality and it’s very shocking to the system.” Gurov was a misogynist who couldn’t survive without women, and then he fell in love and became a contradiction and a paradox and fully human. Chekhov’s story is great because it betrays the reader who at first thinks it’s a simply about adultery and then in time comes to find that more than anything it’s a genuine love story. My story is simply a story about adultery. Or maybe it’s something more. I’m not sure.
Rumpus: “The Knocking” reminded me of the apartments I’ve had where I heard way too much of my neighbor’s doings. I remember waking up in Syracuse to a man yelling to his girlfriend “You don’t call the cops on your man!” I’m wondering if there’s something from your own life you summoned for this one.
Means: Well, suffice it to say I had a few real knockers in my life and they drove me close to madness. Those old pre-war New York buildings have thin walls, and floors, and you hear things you really don’t want to hear. That story—now that it’s in print—reminds me of Cheever’s story, “The Enormous Radio.” In his story, a magic radio allows access into the lives going on in various apartments around the main characters. In my story, the radio seems to be planted inside the narrator’s head. It’s feeding back to him his own emissions.
Rumpus: Along with this – sounds are very important throughout the collection. I’m thinking of the honking the woman in Nebraska does not hear, caused by her own weight on the car horn. Can you talk about the way you write to the other senses, and not just what is seen.
Means: I haven’t really thought about it and didn’t know there were so many sounds in the stories until you mentioned it. I just met the artist George Condo, and he told me there are a lot of colors in my stories. You have to be firing on all cylinders. All five senses have to be totally alive to what’s happening. At least it has to feel that way. One sense or another moves into part of a scene. Of course there’s something more to it, I’m sure. You can’t think about this stuff when you write. You have to be as close as possible as you can to the story. On the other hand, in life outside the work you do have to listen carefully, listen all the time, and really work to find new ways pay attention. You’ve got to pause and spend time sniffing, staring, and listening.
Rumpus: “The Spot” is a brutal and terrific story, with so many twists and turns. I also loved the names in this story, Shank and Ham and Billy T. I wonder from where this story arose. Maybe from our need to make sense of the senseless, or as you put it “a textbook case of discard and loss.”
Means: That statement—“textbook case”—is the story’s point of view, not mine. In general, I don’t think that way. I took a return trip to Niagara Falls a few years back, and my family can attest to the fact that the falls scared the hell out of me. I held my daughter’s hand and stood there looking over that lip, that edge, and then when I refused to go on the Maid of the Mist, the boat that goes up near the falls, everyone was upset with me, but I felt something powerful–love and fear–and it stuck. I lived in an old house in a small Ohio town one summer, with some really scary ex-farm kids who were using serious hardcore drugs. For some reason, that played into the story. The Kalamazoo River is in there, which played a big part in my boyhood and was at that time one of the most polluted rivers in the country. Each year, passing through Cleveland I stand at a spot not far from the Rock & Roll Hall of Fame and look out at the lake, and that inspired the opening. But the truth is, as to what really inspired me to write the story, I’m evading your question because to answer it would be to touch upon some deeply personal matters. In this age of blunt confession, there’s always a temptation to divulge, to spill guts, but for me at least, doing so at this time in my life would destroy the fuel that drives me to write.
Rumpus: There’s such dexterity with time, the way you can slow way down and examine single crucial moments and then span a decade in a single paragraph. I’m thinking of the leap in “The Gulch” where we see how this story will live in the character’s personal folklore. Often we’re given glimpses of a character’s future and then returned to the moment in which that future is determined. Discuss?




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Great interview, thanks for this. Especially liked the connection drawn between the experience of listening to a song and reading/writing a short story. Also the emphasis placed on considering a book of short stories as a whole, not as a grab bag, a collection as its own form. Jayne Anne Phillips: “Every great story is a perfect example of itself.”
Thanks for the probing interview with David Means, which left me feeling like a peeping tom. I value the insights into his creative process, appreciate Means’ dedication to the short story as art form and moral necessity, but think about Hemingway’s comment about rubbing the dust from a butterfly’s wings, which prevents it from flying. The interview exposed the voyeur in me and I’m glad Means has the self-possession to cover up and not completely spill his guts on demand.
As a short story writer, I also found his answer to the question about using the metaphor of life disappearing into the pinpoint of light on an old TV interesting. Means answer that he’s not trying to follow and capture the disappearing pinpoint, but is instead “trying to stare at something while my characters are finding various ways to skirt it and avoid it.†It’s a fascinating answer to me because of the intensity of focus it suggests and the ability to recognize that “something†that the rest of us keep missing. If zeroing in on life’s moral/ethical dilemmas were easy, there’d be no need for storytellers.
Thanks for reminding us through the interview how hard it is to grasp a beating heart and why short stories matter.
“…maybe it slips into your soul: then it becomes part of your life.” This is true of many things, it seems to me, that we human beings are blessed to experience through all types of art, and through nature, and in important relationships with others, and even places and food. I never have realized it before though, and I love and appreciate how David Means articulates this and other truths in this wonderful interview. Just this morning I was visiting with a very dear friend with whom I have always shared a love of reading(especially short stories). We haven’t spent much time together in years, but finally we were able to have an extended visit, just the two of us, and eventually our talk turned to short stories. Ones we love and why, etc. To have such a conversation with someone I’ve known and loved for 35 of my 48 years felt so…satisfying–although I couldn’t have articulated why. Then to read this interview later in the day was a real gift.
I haven’t had the pleasure of reading David Means’ stories before, but I plan to get copies of The Spot for my friend AND me. And I’ll be sure to include a copy of this interview with the book I give to her. Thank you soooo much.
that’s quite a narrative that interview followed. there’s no place else i could get this. viva the rumpus.
This interview was great. I’ve read Means’ stuff for a long time and he is one of those authors who I always have close at hand when I need some inspiration. I’ve written him and he graciously gave me advice on writing. Good stuff.
This was a fantastic interview, and I rarely enjoy interviews so my standard is pretty high. I’d never heard of David Means before, but now I want to read all of his collections.
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