“For some people, being able to use all these words is rather like being faced with a chocolate box with multiple layers; the temptation to overindulge is just too great.”
Alexander McCall Smith makes the case for conciseness.
“For some people, being able to use all these words is rather like being faced with a chocolate box with multiple layers; the temptation to overindulge is just too great.”
Alexander McCall Smith makes the case for conciseness.
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The sentence you quoted is good, and a reminders are useful, but isn’t he just repeating the common wisdom of every freshman writing course? I feel like I’ve read this piece a dozen times. I even scrapped an eerily similar draft for a column, because I thought it was cliché. He could have saved the trouble and just written: “Be concise.”
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